Yet another smut tutorial

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So, this is to answer just one question, that I see a lot in every smut tutorial posted here.

Q.1
Should I have sex in order to write better smut?

A.1
Well....this is weird, because...why not have sex just normally? There aren't many reasons as to why you shouldn't have sex, so, if you do have the capability to do it, it is generally a good idea to do so. Even if you aren't writing smut, having sex can be a pretty good way to be happy for once.

Another reason this is weird is that all my knowledge about such things came from a wikihow article I read when I was 15, it was [3 ways How to have sex, with pictures.] Not counting all the 'research material.'

Q.2
Do you write smut?
A.2
Reading this is probably going to make most of you go away, but, no.
I do have many practice takes that are unpublished. Writing smut isn't exactly my taste, but it is a great way to sharpen your skills, or break a writer's block. Sometimes, I see a post made by K5Rakitan, and that also inspires me to write some.

So, we come to why having sex probably wouldn't help much with writing smut.

While comparing smut with actual sex, you shall notice that they largely differ, due to smut being just a summary of juicy parts. And one might get confused, as to what should be included and what not.

Example.
I was writing a smut.
The woman woke up, drank water, and went to bath.

And I was hit with a question,

When does she pee?

I didn't show her peeing once, she just woke up and took a shower. Later, she will go for work.
When does she pee?!
Did she pee in shower?
Did she wet her bed?
Is she wearing diapers?
..
So, uhh, unless you are a comedy author like me, you probably won't get problems like that...

So, in my opinion, smut gives a rather high amount of freedom when it comes to what the author can do, or cannot do.
I like to say that smut has many variables, that can be freely controlled as per author's wish.

If you are a beginner in writing smut, and don't know where to start, a good idea is to write a vanilla fan fiction. With a lot of backbone already made for you, you can quickly mold the characters to break the bed.
A famous choice I have seen in beginners is Albedo x Momongo, from Overlord.
Another famous choice is Succumbus x Loner/Shota.

If you just want to practice on writing sex scenes, and feel like character personalities are breaking the flow, you can write a one shot about a normal married couple, though adding a twist in the end like ML going to fight in the war, or FLs parents forcing her to marry someone else is a common way to add enough spice to make your practice one shot to something which can be published.


Once you are confident in writing a generic smut, and feel like you have grasped the ropes of what what people like, and what they don't, it is time to write more generic smut till you have lost your arrogance that you are some sort of genius who will make bestsellers.

Anyhow, now it is time for specialisation. This is where you get all the freedom you want.
The only way to do this is to go back to your notepad, and try out different styles, and see what interests you the best.
Don't worry about how the readers will feel about it, or if the idea seems disgusting.
The more you write, the more loyal readers you will get, and those are priceless.

Apart from what other smut tutorials teach you, we have 3 variables left,

1. Awkwardness
There are many opportunities to be awkward.

1. Characters being awkward while buying birth control/ lucky underwear/ sexy underwear.

2. Characters being anxious while searching on internet on what to expect.

3. Characters being anxious while taking a shower.

4. Characters being anxious while waiting for the other person to shower.

5. Characters just sitting next to each other, thinking of a non creepy way to ask the other person to strip.



And that was just before steamy part,
There are a lot of awkward moments hidden during the sex too!
The awkwardness when it doesn't go in
The awkwardness of buying wrong size of condom
The awkwardness of seeing her die of suffocation because you deep throated her too hard,

The list is endless!

Q.3
Ew, that sounds so boring, why would I ever write that?

A.3
Well, you probably won't write all this, but I recommend knowing this for easy manoeuvring of this variable,

Awkwardness, when handled carefully, can very easy be turned to cute or cool, if done correctly. Or, it will turn into creepy if done wrongly.

ML reading a book called,
[How to make women happy.]
Is cute, while
[How to please women, sexually.]
Is creepy.

While if you don't show ML not reading this, but directly applying it, it would be very cool.
ML massaging the sore muscles, or providing mouthwash after a bj, or even him complimenting the other person would very quickly make anyone ////)

Q.4
Oh, so an experienced person wouldn't be awkward, while an inexperienced person would be?
A.4
Hmmm, well, can be true, but, if you want, then no.
If you want, the couple faces no such problems, and the whole point of both being virgins is just a gratification towards your readers.
Its like how trap fans become angry when it turns out he was a she all along.

You can portray the inexperienced couple to be more excited, if you don't want to write all this mess. Something along the lines of coming back from work early, so checking their phone many times.


2. Time
Very closely related to awkwardness, this describes the time devoted to each detail.
Even while hugging, you shall be getting many messages at once from your brain.
Things like,
Her skin is so soft, my fingers sink like marshmallow, her hair smells of flowers yet unknown to me, her chest, it has smell of perfume, my knee, is touching her knee, now my knees is above her knee, now my hand is slowly sliding to her breast, we kisses, I nibbled her lip, my fingers glided across the side of boob, her skin feels so warm, I can feel it.

Brrrr....too many details,
Order them up, arrange them priority wise,
According to your writing skill, erase the ones that seem to take too long to read.

Q.5
Can I somehow write it all?

A.5
Yes, if your skill allows it, you would have to find a way to depict all that, I can't help you there, but if you are this far in the tutorial, that means you probably can't do it.

Though, I have seen some famous smut writers just write stuff like,
Her cervix was penetrated, and her ovaries were getting raped from the pounding.

And that does the trick for them.


3. Consideration
This refers to how kind your characters are.

When one of the characters say,
"Ahh, to-too rough, be gentle! Please!"

Do you have the other character be gentle? Or do you go for the [she eventually began to like it] path?

So, I don't think there is much to talk here, the Onee x Shota genre really explored this consideration thing, with the onee san spending often a lot of time on being gentle, and teaching him stuff, or sometimes, just fangirling over how cute he is.




Q.6
How to write NTR?
A.6
Frick you
 

CupcakeNinja

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ok but how to write NTR?
just focus on the emotions of the person getting cucked. If they are into it, it's bit different. Otherwise, its all doom and gloom. If they sport a boner while watching their wife getting fucked, though, there an aspect of shame you have to portray as well.

I could leave examples but i don't feel like it. Anyway, as long as you are able to write vanilla smut well, you can write any type of smut well. Its mainly about getting the emotional aspect down once you can DESCRIBE the scene intself.
 

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just focus on the emotions of the person getting cucked. If they are into it, it's bit different. Otherwise, its all doom and gloom. If they sport a boner while watching their wife getting fucked, though, there an aspect of shame you have to portray as well.

I could leave examples but i don't feel like it. Anyway, as long as you are able to write vanilla smut well, you can write any type of smut well. Its mainly about getting the emotional aspect down once you can DESCRIBE the scene intself.
Erm, why did you reply to my message? Or was it addressed to everyone who asked this question?
 

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Erm, why did you reply to my message? Or was it addressed to everyone who asked this question?
....other people asked that question? Anyway, you asked one here. We arent allowed to answer questions if we arent OP? Of were you were expecting a ten paragraph dissertation on it?
 

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....other people asked that question? Anyway, you asked one here. We arent allowed to answer questions if we arent OP? Of were you were expecting a ten paragraph dissertation on it?
Nay, it's just that I haven't asked this question. I copied the message of someone else as a joke.
 

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