Your Favorite Chapter To Write

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In Your Novels what was your favorite chapter to write or episode, parts whatever you call your chapters
 

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When i wrote a chapter about the MC fucking his best friend's mother. Who was also the mother of his girlfriend, the friend's sister. Was nice. She deserved a good lay. She deserved to feel loved :blob_teary:
 

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I recently wrote a scene about a lesbian thirsting over her girlfriend's muscles. That was fun.

Nice.

Well, some time ago I had an inspiration and sat and wrote lewd chapter for 2 characters from my story, even though they are more than 1 arc from meeting each other (random inspiration is random, don't judge :sweat_smile:). The fem char is a wolfkin usually pretty composed and prefers to be on the receiving end and likes it rough, but due to circumstances she started acting kinda shy and stuff. I'm slightly proud how I managed to capture her switching from that shy moment into pure predatory state where mid chapter she lost herself and squished male char till the bed almost broke. There were some small details I weirdly feel proud in portraying, like the moment of hesitation where she realized she's too forceful or sudden change in behaviour due to too much teasing.

So sad this shit won't see daylight till like fucking forever.

But besides that, I generally like describing fights in detail.
 

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Contrary to how it might have been assumed, that one isn't a smut and 18+ scenes are sporadical and only in viable, not forced moments. It's actually kinda generic adventure isekai (but mc gets isekaied from one fantasy world to another, which is almost identical). And since I haven't wrote that much of it down yet (95% is still in my head), that's just my current fav one.

This may change when I write the one revealing one of the character secret backstories. Dunno, can't say, I might butcher it like shit too. You never know until you are done.
 

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Y'all got some funny chapters y'all wrote in your novels🤣😂🤣😂
Pfft. That stuff's nothin', i once had a heroine eat onion rings off the main character's cock.

And a trio of mad scientist lolies performed inhuman experimentations to give themselves animal ears in an endeavor to curry favor with him.

Then they were sentenced to group counciling alongside women who also were deemed certifiably ill of mind...due to their obsession with the MC.

And you dont even wanna know about the time the guy unleashed a giant water slime monster upon a town of mercenaries and had it molest their anuses with watery tentacles.


...fuck my novel gets weird.

And to be honest i am not even sure its the weirdest one here. Im almost afraid to ask what kinda oddball shit some of these other guys have in their stories.
 

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My best chapter was probably either chapter 4: Omen, or the epilogue of volume 1. The first one was super emotional, super layered, had a foreshadowing of things that wouldn't appear until much much later, and overall felt like one of those chapters that would be talked about a lot once the story gets going. For the epilogue, I think it wrapped up the first volume nicely, showed character motivations, cleared up some confusion, and set up the stage perfectly for the next volume.
 

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Little speechless from cupcake... but having read some of it, I know the depravity won't end there. Not a bad thing at all!

Anyways, my favourite chapter that I have written so far is the four chapter duel between 2 Arrogant Young Masters. It was a heated battle of clashing egos that threatened to topple the heavens and rupture the earth. Best of all, I barely made the fight an actual fight because their egos refused to engage in combat. Just egos clashing.

Other than that, any chapter where I get to write about heroines. Whether they are being cute or not it doesn't matter. Just writing about them and developing them puts me with satisfaction. 😊
 

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My favorite chapter was probably my heroine giving a "conscription speech" to local farmers. Simply because it was way too much fun to write. Had planned way more for that chapter, but halfway down the speech it was so long I had to cut the chapter in two...

Besides that... my "best" chapter is... I don't know. Probably none :D
 

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The setup: Dan Capra, an underpaid high School teacher, went to a nightclub last night with his 14 year old student in order to procure an accounting job with the club owner... The next day this happened:

*Baaaaaaaan!* His apartment buzzer rang, “Oh for the love of Christmas, who the heck can this be?”

He pressed the intercom talk button, “Hello? Yes?”

“Hi, is this Daniel Capra?” A woman’s voice.

“Umm, how can I help you?” he asked.

“Yeah, my name is Reyna Rai, I’m Rica Reyes’ mom! Yeah, the little girl you went dancing with last night. Yes, that little girl. So you and I need to talk right now, Mr. Capra! Please buzz me in!”

A bucket of cold sweat dropped on Dan, “Oh crap, this ain’t good!” he muttered to himself as he buzzed the woman in.

🤣🤣🤣
In Dan's defense, his 14 year old student is quite troublesome.

Why do Bad Girls Love Dan?
 
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Here I am getting excited writing heartache and
emotional suffering for my characters. I like writing my characters into a deep dark hole of soul crushing depression then bringing them out of the darkness and into the light. Misery is the best growth.
 

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Here I am getting excited writing heartache and
emotional suffering for my characters. I like writing my characters into a deep dark hole of soul crushing depression then bringing them out of the darkness and into the light. Misery is the best growth.
as long as there is catharsis in all of that misery. something good needs come out of it. misery for misery's sake is depression porn.
 

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Here I am getting excited writing heartache and
emotional suffering for my characters. I like writing my characters into a deep dark hole of soul crushing depression then bringing them out of the darkness and into the light. Misery is the best growth.

Oh, I like those too~! Mine are always too context-dependent to explain easily, though.

Although I will always love that time when I thought I'd written a really hackneyed, cop-out death scene for a character and it turned out I left my friend emotionally devastated. Got a nice message just saying, "You bastard!"

Which horrible misery scenes are your favourite?
 

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My favorite chapter to write was the fight against the S rank adventurer.
My protagonist has some broken powers. She has healing magic, regeneration where the world detects her body is damaged and fixes it, her orders where everything she says is absolute and you have to do it, and her Empress Aura where she releases her power and you're forced to kneel and can't move unless told by her.
So it was fun and exciting to write a fourteen-year-old girl beating and scaring the shit out of her.
 

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as long as there is catharsis in all of that misery. something good needs come out of it. misery for misery's sake is depression porn.
And what's so bad about depression porn?! Jk :blob_happy: I feel you.
Oh, I like those too~! Mine are always too context-dependent to explain easily, though.

Although I will always love that time when I thought I'd written a really hackneyed, cop-out death scene for a character and it turned out I left my friend emotionally devastated. Got a nice message just saying, "You bastard!"

Which horrible misery scenes are your favourite?
When you're readers love a character far more than you. You're like: "Whoops!" :blob_uwu:

Same, most of mine need build up to be effective. But one of my favorite scenes I wrote was a final moment yuri confession.

Character 1 begging for something as mundane as character 2's tasteless cookies...just because it came from them. The moment showed how much the other idolized them and would even give their life to be held and noticed by the other... That they'll never get to be with them as much as they hoped for. They will never have that happy ending that was destined never to happen from the beginning. All the dreams they had were washed away at this moment so the last thing they can do is pour out what they feel. But as a final bite, the character grows silent as they're eyes look away from the person they loved. Then and only then does the reality set into character 2 that character 1's voice will never touch their ears again. :blob_happy:

And not only death scenes but emotional heartbreaking ones that feel like there's no way out. Oh, I love those.
 

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My favorite chapters to write are always the ones that cause the most thought, speculation, and controversy among the readers. Incidentally, they also happen to be some of the darkest points in my story.

There was one chapter where a dryad starts a riot. People wind up getting beaten and trampled to death, and that's before they start pulling actual weapons. In a later chapter, part of the main cast finds some poor woman with her face completely bashed in.

I also like the F-you scenes where somebody stands up and fights back against the cruelty in my world. There was one where this kid who was hopelessly overpowered is basically being ordered to seriously maim a woman who has been lightly tormenting him up till this point. He basically says "yeah right" and then turns to the guy who's trying to force him and stabs him in the leg with the very weapon they gave him. The kid then gets the snot kicked out of him, but at least he stood up for himself.
 
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