Recent content by alex_lightwind

Good smut story is hard to find tbh.

Thank you for your feedback. I did more world building and inner thoughts later on, but my first chapter is clearly lacking in this regard. I wanted to fix it but I was afraid of slowing the pace way too much. I'm planning on rewriting the first chapter when I have better skills.

See you soon.

Nothing.

More than I should.

Yes.

Desolate autumn, I lost my path.

I'd like to hear your opinion on my webnovel. Shido, The Shadow. Synopsis: After an accident, a young man finds himself in an unfamiliar world. A world where your status is equal to your strength. Can he gain access to power? And how far is he willing to go to achieve his goals?

I think 1.5k - 4k words is the optimal size for a chapter (for a webnovel). But no one is stopping you from posting a 10k+ chapter.

In fiction, anything is possible.

People do sacrifices for what they deem worth dying for. You have to put something she holds dear in a grave danger and force her to make a decision. If there are no stakes, if there is no internal-personal conflict, its fake.

Yeaaah, i kinda did this. I constantly used - to designate the dialogue because in my native language it is used this way in literature. now i feel stupid because i subconsciously assumed it is the same in English as well :D At least its not a big deal to fix this.