Recent content by AriaJane

Okay I read your first chapter. To start with the good, I felt like you were good at conjuring imagery and I have a clear idea of what your hero looks like and I want to know more about the 'stories' the scars and cuts on his body mean already. I can grasp his personality is quite reserved...

Yonks ago there was a fad of "Who would you fall for?" stories on some site and I tried my hand at those. I had no clue what I was doing but they were similar to otome games so I liked making them. I'd love to make my own otome game one day, so while not a "choose your own adventure" novel I am...

My inner voice doesn't know how to shut up. Intrusive thoughts are the worst, but uncontrollable daydreaming is pretty rough too. Sometimes, when I read, my inner voice talks over whatever is going on in the story/book/manga I'm reading and I have to start again from the top 1000 times before I...

Thanks so much! I can see your point, although it is a little bit intentional for the MC to be a bit passive and mostly respond to situations because she's a child, and that's kind of just what it is like as a kid. The decisions of people around you affect what happens way more than what you...

Hi hi! I'm still new here, and I'm writing my first webnovel. I'd really appreciate any feedback I can get so that I can improve my craft. My story is primarily a fantasy romance that follows my heroine, Lily, and my hero, Frederick, from being children until they reach adulthood. I already...

For me, it depends a lot on how I'm feeling. Often I can't make myself write even when I want to. If I write for an hour then I get 1600 words on average, if I manage to write a few hours a day, I can get 5000 words quite easily. But then I risk burnout. I don't have anywhere set up for just...

Wording this is actually very difficult. Assuming we don't keep hurling ourselves into the apocalypse, I think people will be quite surprised which types of jobs will be lost to machines and technology first. I don't think it will be the lower, 'unskilled' labour force who suffer the brunt, but...

Time is relative and age is just a number!

I like having background noise because it stops my brain from trying to do too many things at once. Usually a show or a movie I've seen a million times so I can ignore it without being distracted. Consciously blocking out the talking somehow helps me concentrate better. Music does help me with...

Hello All! I joined here a few days ago and have spent the entire time procrastinating doing literally anything, but I finally found the introduction thread! Name/Nickname you want us to call you - You can call me Aria, Jane, or AJ. AJ is cool :D Hobbies/interests- I love video games, reading...