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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Yes, I chose a somewhat difficult way to present the plot, thereby challenging my own imagination. It took half a day to create the first chapter, since the foundation was crumpled and it was not difficult to add more information and descriptions to give at least some decent background. I caught...
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Hello, could you take a look at my book too? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1038291/lost-emotions-journey-of-an-isekai/
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    Feedback of the book.

    There comes a time for every author when he wants to look at his story through someone else's eyes and hear what he has not seen in any way. For me, such a moment came last night. I wrote the first chapters 3-4 years ago and just now I started reviving the book, giving it flesh and blood from...
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Hi. I would appreciate feedback on the first chapter: The Game of Empires: Lost in the Arena.
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    Free feedback thread.

    Hi. I would be infinitely glad to receive the first feedback of my book(: The Game of Empires: Lost in the Arena.
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