Recent content by Chaperone

Hey @TheTrinary please review my prologue. I have edited it a few times already as views dropped off quite hard afterwards. Would love to know where Im going wrong. Thanks in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/783282-the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/chapter/783286/

Hey @FatElf I would love it if you could review my first chapter. First time writing so any feedback is golden. THanks. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Hello @M.G.Driver would love to hear your thoughts on my novels first chapter. Thanks in advance for your time. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Hey @OatMush would love to see how far you get with mine. Thanks for your time. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Hey @Glitched, please could review my novel. I am happy to take some brutal feedback if it's needed. Cheers. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Understood, the slang actually plays a subtle part in the foreshadowing of a betrayal later down the line. However, I am reading it in a specific British (commonish and Northenesc) accent that readers may not pick up on. I suppose we roll the ball and hope people can collect sometimes. Thanks again.

Thanks for the help, I see exactly what you mean after reading your rework of the blurb. You're a hero!

Thanks for taking the time to read through those chapters. I will have another crack at that tricky prologue, felt like a good idea so so so long ago. I'll consider your other points while I'm doing my edit. Churrs chux

Hey, please can try my novel. I don't mind feedback on the thread. Thanks in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Hey, any feedback is helpful. I don't mind it being posted here. Thanks for your time. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Hey @Corty I would love some advice on my cover and blurb etc. Thank you for time. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

Dear chick, it would be great to have you feed upon my story. Any little nuggets would be appreciated. Thanks. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/