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    Give me your creatures! This is an order, not a suggestion.

    But, Sir NineHeadHeavenDevouringServant. You've just described it!
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    Mortals, I seek your opinions on this matter.

    4. But with the font colour from 5. Don't cover the feet!
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    Is Piracy Wrong?

    Techinically, it is. But that's not gonna stop from stealin' yer gold! :blob_evil:
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    Darn! You've found me. Who are you again? :blob_hmm_two:

    Darn! You've found me. Who are you again? :blob_hmm_two:
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    Any advice for newbies in writing a novel?

    Imagine the general setting and premise for your story. No need to be elaborate. Just ask yourself what is your story like/about? Who are the main characters? What are their general personalities like? Etc. Then think of an ending and work your way towards that ending. And remember to have fun...
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    Writing tip and advice that didn't work.

    "Show. Don't tell." Just so you know, people are dumb. Including myself. And some readers can't read and infer and needs to be directly told instead. "Show AND tell." would be a better advice in my opinion
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    Have you ever watched an anime filler episodes that was good?

    If I have to say then it's probably the G8 arc after the Skypeia arc in One Piece. I didn't think it was filler until years after I watched it and I thought it was good.
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    Which is the scene you are most proud of having written?

    Probably the moment when my MC commands an army of bugs and commits nuclear massacre. ...in a game.
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    What's your fear?

    Having no money
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    How thoroughly do you plan a chapter?

    For each chapter, I look at the previous chapter and ask myself how I can proceed from there, then write whichever possible route I think would suit the next chapter. For example, right now, I'm thinking of how I should write my story's MC spar with a big muscular mommy in a gym, for training...
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    Help with an idea for a Curse

    Kill the caster of the curse. That's the way to remove it before it can fully turn them. I would say no for now, since the idea is that the Demonification Curse is special among the other curses, as it has five effects put into one in a sequence, while other curses would only have a single...
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    Help with an idea for a Curse

    The idea is that she becomes a type of demon that is uncanny from a human in terms of appearances. But the anatomy is different, which they won't know unless they cut her open. So people thinks she is human while hiding the fact that she's been cursed. She also has a high magic resistance so...
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    Help with an idea for a Curse

    My mistake. I should have mentioned that the curse's effect would be instantaneous if the target doesn't have the magic resistance to fully counter it. Meaning that those five stages would happen all at once if it's used on like a regular soldier or civilian, but be slowed or halted if used on a...
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    Help with an idea for a Curse

    Well, physical is where the gender-bending happens so... I don't really want to change that. And I want the MC to realise the change in her senses as the story progresses, which is why I put physical as the first stage. The rest, however, I'll do that. Thanks. :)
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