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    Kinda late, but... can anyone give me some feedback?

    As somebody who has rushed their prologue, I can comfortably state that the beggining is very rushed… Maybe you could give your protagonist a personality or quirks to balance things out a bit? I wouldn't know, though, I am an amateur aswell… I'm going to be harsh here: Having Chris die as soon...
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