Thanks for your feedback. I am writing some more chapters, but like I said, I just wanted to see whether there were any big red flags that I missed until now. Thanks for your feedback either way. I was way too eager I guess.
Hi everyone,
I just registered yesterday and started writing my first story. My strength lies in bringing new ideas to the table while I am weaker at writing characters.
I hope you would read the prologue and voice out any thoughts you have about the same. If there are any massive errors that I...