Thank you so much for the review/commentary on the story. I'm glad that alot of my characterizations and such hit the way they should have. Your comments about elevating the evilness of the fascist regime are super interesting because I explicitly toned down the villainy to make it more...
Hello there and thank you for being willing to provide feedback on folks' stories. Here's mines, By Any Magical Means Necessary. It's a near future science fantasy. I would love feedback around the plotting, keeping your interest, and fiction-believability since it's a "real world" story.
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