Thank you for all the feedback.
I'm glad it's a fun story, and it's great to know what I need to work on.
I aim to improve and will do my best to do so.
Good morning/evening
I've seen a few of these feedback threads, but have ben unsure. I think it would be best to get the feedback, but I don't know where to ask. Ill give a few options, and let you pick. Each chapter is between 1300-2000 words, so they will be in 2 chapter chunks.
Chapter 7-8...
I wasnt sure if i wanted to post here or not. I think this is where readers are supposed to post, but I haven't seen any posts by readers, just authors.
I think some readers will like it. I have more traditional smut in the chapters 4 - 8 chapters with magic mixed in.
feel free to either...