Recent content by IAmGuavaFruit

Yeah, those are appreciated criticisms right there, and I can understand what you mean. Sadly, the time the story picked up was about chapter 6 or 8 where MC gets his first struggle and a little peek at why MC is a bit emotionless. I also have plans, very dark plans. Nonetheless, thanks for...

Yep, thought that would turn readers away. I've read one too many of them, and most of them had this line, especially if they were LitRPG or GameLit. But too late, I guess, I wrote the first chapter at the dead of night, and thought '**** it and went ahead with posting it anyway.' Yeah, I'm no...

Well then, time to advocate for more Monke stories... Go hard on it please! <(_ _)> https://www.scribblehub.com/series/229774/reject-humanity-return-to-monke/

Oh frick, I forgot to remove the comedy tag since the fic became something else entirely in the later chapters, well anyway, appreciate the feedback and your honest opinion!

Hmmm... Why not? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/229774/reject-humanity-return-to-monke/

Well then... Time to audition my own... I'm screwed aren't I? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/229774/reject-humanity-return-to-monke/

Heyo, lookin' for some feedback in terms of writing, fight scenes, as well as just normal scenes. If possible, even the mental state of MC. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/229774/reject-humanity-return-to-monke/

Hello, care to give a fellow author some feedback? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/225084/life-as-a-game-cool/