Recent content by Immortal_17

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    Crazy, REAL Yandere Stories

    Teacher and student, huh? Reminds me of this: https://mangakakalot.com/read-hq0ln158504984701
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    Check out my awesome cover i had commissioned!

    It looks badass🔥
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    Why the *beep* does the female protag keep returning to her abuser?

    16 years old💀
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    Should I write long chapters or short chapters?

    1500 words is the average you should aim for as a new author. There are many readers who will rather skim through the chapter just because it's long. Only make your chapters longer than 2500 words if there are very important plotpoints and scenes. Other than that you can split chapters however...
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    Paying an Artist

    Thanks. I'll check it out.
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    Elyon

    Don't be a coward and say it's me. You're making it obvious. My reasons are warranted because some just give stupid complaints. One example is when someone complained that the MC was helping the hero get stronger. The reason the MC was doing this was because he didn't want to fight the big guys...
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    Elyon

    My question is literally "what do you guys think about it". Are you too lazy to read the whole thing?
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    Elyon

    For those of you who know Elyon(author of Reincarnated with the strongest system). I recently saw the author's work on a pirated site. The author seems to be a completely arrogant and prideful douchebag. They lash out at even the slightest reason if someone hates their story. They even reply to...
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    Paying an Artist

    What about Payoneer?
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    Paying an Artist

    What payment methods do authors usually use who commission art for their stories? I hope not PayPal because I'm having some issues with it lately.
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    How would you punish a bad boy?

    Lock him in a room and throw teargas in there
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    Why do people leave reviews after reading just the first chapter?

    Only post a review when you are able to determine the pace of the story, the relationships between characters, how characters grow(if any growth happens at all), how the MC changes after experiencing a lot of the things that happened, etc... People who review first chapters or even ten...
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    Recommendations Dark Sci-fi and Fantasy Novels

    My MC from Reborn As The Villain is pretty anti-hero especially in the latest chapters. You can check it out if you want.
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    I'm not sure whether to continue my story with 'I' or my character's name.

    Use I when it's your main character's monologue and use third person when someone is talking about your MC and mentioning his name and/or actions. If your MC is a person who was transmigrated into another person then it's not necessary to change anything in your story.
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    I'm not sure whether to continue my story with 'I' or my character's name.

    What perspective are you using? Mentioning "I" all the time is generally associated with first person perspective so there's nothing wrong with that. You should read other stories(both third and first person) to see how the authors write out their stories using perspective.
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