Thank you for the feedback and I appreciate the time you spent reading and providing criticism ^_^
In any case I would address the problems that you have took notice during the early phases of writing the story.
For one, this problem was on me. I didn't realize that the structure of the table...
Due to a recommendation the chapter has been written down to 2k words! Furthermore, as this chapter will be quite long, I will have to write 5.3 and perhaps 5.4 depending on the length of the chapter.
Latest chapter of the series!: CHAPTER 5.2
Looking for a seinen to read? Come give...
Looking for a seinen novel to read? How about some drama? War?
The latest chapter of the novel: Chapter 5.1 is out now with over 4k words!
Check out the ongoing novel!: Reincarnated Life of a War Hero (戦争ヒーローの復活した人生) | Scribble Hub
Finding a seinen novel to read? Perhaps with drama? How about some violence? War?
Check out my ongoing novel!: Reincarnated Life of a War Hero (戦争ヒーローの復活した人生) | Scribble Hub
Current story being written. A seinen story with mature themes, that is, if you do not mind death, gore, drama, or violence.
Reincarnated Life of a War Hero (戦争ヒーローの復活した人生) | Scribble Hub
Hopefully you don't mind a bit of seinen or mature themes. I appreciate any feedback as I need to know of my shortcomings as an author. So, if you have the time, thank you for the feedback! (●'◡'●)
Reincarnated Life of a War Hero (戦争ヒーローの復活した人生) | Scribble Hub
If you have the time, thank you! It will be a great help for me to know what I am currently lacking as an author. ^_^
Reincarnated Life of a War Hero (戦争ヒーローの復活した人生) | Scribble Hub