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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/349179/the-house-of-dusk/ My bad

Hi! I was wondering if anyone could mayhap tell me what they thought of my initial two chapters. Is there too much info thrown out there, is it too confusing, and what do you think might need better explaining. And is the writing any good? It's hard to self critique something you've worked...

I know, that's why I decided not to continue with it. I wrote the prologue, and then was like "hmm, do I really want to write this?" And I decided that I didn't. It sounded good when I thought about it. But when I began to pen it into existence, it was meh. And it was a Chinese inspired...

I do see that. I'm not really going to go through with writing it I think, so I'll lay out what I initially wanted with the prologue and what it was supposed to add to the story. The prologue was meant to display how the MC became so revenge focused. And where the voices that continuously...

Premise: Revenge focused Xianxia/Wuxia Prologue: The window was open, Sinai realized. Slowly he sensed the slight push of the afternoon wind on his loose robes. It moved between the half-mended holes in his old, heavy worn robes. Upwards it slithered. Past his torse, his face and then back...

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