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Just revised my first chapter, would be good to get your thoughts. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763239/echoes-of-aetheria/

Would be great to get some feedback on this https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763239/echoes-of-aetheria/

Would love some feedback please https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763239/echoes-of-aetheria/

Hi all, I am currently writing a litrpg book and was just wondering what people thoughts were on putting full class and race descriptions at the end of the chapter they were mentioned in? Tia

Well this Lord plants hope you have a good day too!

:blob_hide: Wow, this is more advice than I was expecting thank you. I do feel I rushed the start because I didn't want to bore the readers with the starter area to much but what you said makes lot of sense. I probably should have added more dialogue and more description of the place she was...

Hello all, As I am currently new around these parts I thought it best to drop in and say hi. I posted my first four chapters last night but I am slightly worried about how it will be perceived as I obviously know where the story is headed which excites me but readers don't have that knowledge...

A small Ethereal Dragon named Remus that only she can see and hear.