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    sites like scribblehub, except for degenerates

    All online novel sites does have plenty of degenerative stories. But it all depending on the readers and the authors, whether they wanted to go to these paths.
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    Long Stories Harder to End

    I think the best way to make a satisfactory ending is to write your planned ending first on your draft, before taking care of the rest. Because working on the ending is the equivalent of putting up the highly-guarded fences, before working onto the building itself.
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    What songs are you listening to?

    Any songs from Pendulum.
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Noted. Thanks for your feedback, and I'll promise that I'll fixing the story grammar flow and sometimes ignoring the ProWritingAid suggestion. Because the machine could deceive me and differs from the real world proofreading.
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    Writing 5 tips for writing more

    Funny enough on this "Don't listen to music while writing" is differs from myself. I get bored easily when I'm writing something and there is no music to accompany my boredom on writing something (Either it's novel, college tasks, etc.) Henceforth, listening to some music pumps me up and makes...
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    Give me tips ans help for writing because i'm new

    1. Shorten up the introduction 2. Focus on to the main plot 3. Focus on the conversation first (If you're lost in the middle) 4. Write first and edit later 5. Always take your time 6. Write not for money, but for passion 7. Never ever over-convince everyone 8. Prioritize your most passionate...
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Here's mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/567472/scorching-black-vulture/
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    Literary laziness

    For me, to put it simply, laziness in writing is when you didn't edit your chapter words. Just like Salius Gebel once mentioned: You write a draft, and you see several mistakes in your chapter wordings: Either if it's punctuations, grammar, new paragraphs, etc. Normally, people will edit these...
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    This is why I hate humans

    That same person who's yelling "Anime fans are creeps!!!" yet they're ignoring Cuties and the real abuse cases.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I would love you to checking out the 1st chapter of my book. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/567472/scorching-black-vulture/
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    Fantasy, Scifi, and Supernatural Please

    Might as well give this novel a try. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/567472/scorching-black-vulture/
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    Writing Show don't tell: Emotions in writing

    I felt like, what most author forget is they're writing a story. And writing is mostly about describing. Henceforth, the readers have differing thought from us as an author in showing/telling the story sequence we've written on. As we couldn't expect the reader to be in line with our thoughts...
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    Do you also feel the same?

    Funny enough that my novel is inspired by action rpg video games. I don't need to read tons of boring sci-fi book if I can just mash my hand on the action rpg games. Like Punishing Gray Raven, Devil May Cry, Nier Automata, etc.
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    Honest Critiques & Comments Thread

    I would love to see if you're reviewing mine. You can give me your feedback via here or PM on my profile. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/567472/scorching-black-vulture/
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    Using music in a story

    If you wish to put an insert music on your chapter, just write. "Insert Music: your favorite artist - your favorite song" On the top of the paragraph intro. Simple as that.
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