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    Resolved Error establishing a database connection

    Same, and post time for a new chapter is coming up. I guess that's what I get for not scheduling.
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    @Corty lol I keep forgetting to @ the right comment.

    @Corty lol I keep forgetting to @ the right comment.
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    The fuck did I just read? @Paul_Tromba

    The fuck did I just read? @Paul_Tromba
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    Yeah, they take quite a while to ripen.

    Yeah, they take quite a while to ripen.
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    Oh thanks well I edited the comment

    Oh thanks well I edited the comment
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    Side note, there a quite a few wild pineapples growing near where I live. [IMG]

    Side note, there a quite a few wild pineapples growing near where I live.
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    Fair enough

    Fair enough
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    @Anon2023 Whats with you people and pineapples?

    @Anon2023 Whats with you people and pineapples?
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    Me and my last remaining brain cells trying to edit something I wrote the previous day.

    Me and my last remaining brain cells trying to edit something I wrote the previous day.
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    Tropes/Cliches you can't help but enjoy?

    Awesome I'll have a look at them
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    Tropes/Cliches you can't help but enjoy?

    The Mc that dies in a last ditch fight or betrayed by a close friends and travels back in time to the day were he just applies to magic school /swordsman school/temple. Or the male mc that can't seem to keep his pheromones in check.
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    Dipping my feet into the FREE FEEDBACK pool.

    Might as well post mine here. Let me know what you think, still somewhat new to writing hopefully some improvement from my last edits. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/
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    First Chapter Analysis

    I see very insightful.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    I am assuming you only read the prologue, so ill discuss that. If not, let me know ill try to clarify what I can. Ill mostly give my intentions when writing this. Hopefully, this can help you help me. Yes, my intention was to start off with a catastrophe hook, although my initial intention was...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Thinking about going back to update all my chapters once the first arc is done, it will be great to know what I did wrong in my first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/
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