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    Looking for Things to Review

    I'll throw my hat into the ring, why not. I have two novels atm; one is a queer dark fantasy novel centered around themes of mental illness called Serenity of the Crow. Its about an undying woman haunted by her past and an annoyingly talkative crow, and a a trans witch that has suddenly had the...
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    Can someone have a second look on my synopsis or first chapter?

    Just looking at the synopsis alone, I'd say you can cut this line entirely: "Unfortunately, Vincent was bound to become a programmer even in this other world with his [Programming] and [Developer Interface] Vocations" It's clunky and distracting, and doesn't convey any more information than this...
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