Recent content by NobodyAtHelm

Thank you very much for the critique! It's embarrassing to admit, but I hadn't even thought of paring things down for the readers' engagement in the way you laid out like this. I'll have to take a hacksaw to this thing when I find the time.

Hello! I'm new to writing and web-novels in general. If you have the time, I would greatly appreciate it if you could give my story some feedback! Rose Stem be (Not) Brittle - Chapter 1