If you're giving feedback i'd love some. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/197495/the-last-daimon-of-primus-planan/
I only have 2 chapters so far.
I'm starting writing a story right now, as i'm aware that my story lacks many things as a new author id appreciate any and all feedback so if you have time please check it out and tell me what you think. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/197495/the-last-daimon-of-primus-planan/