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    I need some feedback back for my first time writing angst (First Chapter)

    Right... I wrote everything in the present tense then changed it very quickly to the past tense before publishing it :') I "waked"... It must sting the eye quite well. Thanks for reminding me to take notice of that and not forgetting to develop well that part because it is a very important one...
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    I need some feedback back for my first time writing angst (First Chapter)

    I love reading that kind of story but I don't know if my first chapter is working... Here ^^
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