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    What is your favorite interdimensional world hopping story or MC

    What is your favorite possibly world wrecking, Universe hopping, maybe even cannon twisting Story or MC? For Cannon twisting it is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/363851/accidental-multiverse-planeswalker/ For world hopping it is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/81242/summoned-again/
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    Anyone has this reading problem?

    I have had that problem when I tried to read when I was super tired, haven't had my coffee, when I was on cold medicine, and on one occasion when I was battling some mild depression. So my recommendation is get a good night's sleep, drink something with some caffeine, make sure you are getting...
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    Recommendations A good VR into reality story

    Well I guess nobody has a recommendation...
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    Recommendations A good VR into reality story

    Anyone read any good Virtual Reality that turns into real Reality or possibly a good I got stuck in VR type story?
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    How do you make a couple break up?

    If one of them has an opportunity to advance their career significantly but they have to move half way across the globe for a long term stay, the other person might not be able to cope.
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    When a random thought breaks your story immersion

    I'm just saying some things trip me up. It could be an omition of some kind or a phrase of dialogue or a piece of tech that is ooc for the world settings. I understand if an author doesn't want to go into disgusting details, and I don't want them to. But they can be addressed and then glossed...
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    When a random thought breaks your story immersion

    And I totally agree with that. Most of time I have no problem with skipping the unimportant things. The whole point of fiction is to suspend your disbelief and immerse yourself in someone else's world. But if you're gonna be super detailed about a particular scene toss in a couple of sentences...
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    When a random thought breaks your story immersion

    I wasn't exactly trying to be super picky but it just sorta bugs me when (an admittedly fictional) story is extremely into the details and then skips something. Like the restaurant scenario. Super detailed about the food, the service, the decor, and then they just leave without mentioning...
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    When a random thought breaks your story immersion

    I understand and accept that I am a scatterbrain. I do really. But I really hate it when a random reality check question breaks my immersion in what is otherwise a good story. It's always the little details that trip me up. Here are some things that ping my reality radar.. Why do some Authors...
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    How do you make a couple break up?

    Do you have Future knowledge that they A) complete suck as a couple, B) their children are worse than the spawn of Satan, or C) for some reason having that particular couple get together tips the world into a downward spiral and/or Apocalypse?
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    How do you make a couple break up?

    How long have they been dating? Are they just casual or are they serious? Are they religious? Do they have the same religion? What kind of parents do they have? What kind of relationship do they have with their parents? Would they listen to or believe them if their parents said something bad...
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    Looking for Alphareaders

    I'm just a reader, but I would be happy to help.
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