I don't know why I thought I'd get a notification when you replied, but I did. No notification, so I missed this entirely. It's a bit late, but thank you so much for your comments - you've given me some really good tips for things to work on.
I think I like reading 3rd person more, but writing 1st person is easier for me.
When I write stuff like 'I did blah, he did blah' feels more natural than 'name A did blah, name B did blah.'
I might be a freak.
The blurb is the thing I'm struggling with the most. I feel like I should be describing the story in a fun way, but then I also want to be fairly clear about what's in it. If I lean more toward fun, it gets less clear what's in there. If I lean towards clear, it reads more like a list of tags...
I never realised how much I know about horses until I started writing the story I'm currently working on. I'd write a first draft of a scene, come back to edit and think 'Hang on, surely that's not the word for that, that's silly.' Then I'd look it up, and lo; it is called a dandy brush. I've...