Recent content by Waterly

*looks at my novel draft and sighs* "No." Though, I do feel ya. Questions to ask yourself though you likely know them already; What do I like to read? What do I like about those stories? What am I curious about in books and life in general? I'm going for an obscure unlikely to be helpful...

Nice manga strip! But, how did you manage to leave the weeb phase?!

Snails type faster than me. They don't even have fingers and thumbs 😢

Interesting framework. You could add or shorten it in the future. Add a section on dialogue if it is important or take out themes if it is not to the story being reviewed. More importantly, I disagree with Alseki. This is little texty text needs more text!

Answering far too literally for a forum post but here goes: "What does enthusiastic writing look like?" No idea. No one does. There is no known technique to judge 'enthusiasm' from writing. The commenter made an intuitive guess. A comment that has all the worth and weight of gossip and...