Lumberbot
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So I incorporated those helpful individuals helps, though there still something wrong in my paragraphs as if something is missing. Here it is.
The morning sun peered over the horizon, casting hues upon the grassy hill, each blade bathed in dew swayed in ripples, brushed against one another, as gentle breeze wove through. Amongst the imposing contours, somewhere over the open meadow, beneath those gargantuan clouds, had stood a youth, clad in a ragged muddled fabric, with a tattered satchel hung onto his shoulder. Breathed in eased, eyes gazed at the shining celestial, felt a warmth solaced amidst tremoil deep within, too mesmerised for such pondering thoughts from which remained stunned.
Then something shouted from behind; the young man turned, there laid before his eyes is a village built crudely upon decrepit woods, path alongside and between from, barely visible, much to muddled to discerned from those houses eroded walls tainted rooted in manner so similar.
The morning sun peered over the horizon, casting hues upon the grassy hill, each blade bathed in dew swayed in ripples, brushed against one another, as gentle breeze wove through. Amongst the imposing contours, somewhere over the open meadow, beneath those gargantuan clouds, had stood a youth, clad in a ragged muddled fabric, with a tattered satchel hung onto his shoulder. Breathed in eased, eyes gazed at the shining celestial, felt a warmth solaced amidst tremoil deep within, too mesmerised for such pondering thoughts from which remained stunned.
Then something shouted from behind; the young man turned, there laid before his eyes is a village built crudely upon decrepit woods, path alongside and between from, barely visible, much to muddled to discerned from those houses eroded walls tainted rooted in manner so similar.