If I were to rank your feedback, out of the around 10 I have received, yours is like the 3rd or 4th harshest but only due to a few words, and that's if I really try to analyze it. I truly appreciate all feedback, good or bad. Otherwise, how can I improve my writing? Even if you tore into me and even put in some curses, I would still thank you for the effort you put into my feedback.