Thank you, but I'm not very smart; I just like to read between the lines and piece together the clues people leave me.
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Nahrenne
MC69 thinks himself a sleuth?
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Nahrenne
To clarify, MC69, I'm talking about actual chocolate.
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You have intelligence and sentience.
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You have intelligence and sentience.
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Assurbanipal_II
Someone bothered to pick up the crumbs I left ... I am moved.
Someone bothered to pick up the crumbs I left ... I am moved.
MatchaChocolate69
Don't you ever, when watching a movie or reading a novel, anticipate the plot developments or the twists? I'm not talking about poorly written works, but in general. Authors usually leave clues, and so do people.
Nahrenne
*gets a vacuum to clean you up*
Such a messy eater, A2.
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Such a messy eater, A2.
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Assurbanipal_II
I munch a lot, so I leave many crumbs, but I guess my plot is fairly predictable.
I munch a lot, so I leave many crumbs, but I guess my plot is fairly predictable.
Nahrenne
I, uh, kind of get told off by my family for constantly talking when watching stuff with them.
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I, uh, kind of get told off by my family for constantly talking when watching stuff with them.
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Nahrenne
I tend to pick up on stuff really quickly, then get frustrated that the author then starts spoon-feeding for the ones who didn't.
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Nahrenne
I mean, I'd only read 8-ish chaps and predicted almost your entire plot, no?
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I mean, I'd only read 8-ish chaps and predicted almost your entire plot, no?
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MatchaChocolate69
Me too
Assurbanipal_II
What is the entire plot, then?
What is the entire plot, then?
Nahrenne
About the MC's actions and progression, remember?
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Assurbanipal_II
That was hardly a challenge and fairly easy to predict. Almost like a child needing to grow up. Not to mention with how information the reader was initially provided with compared to the MC.
That was hardly a challenge and fairly easy to predict. Almost like a child needing to grow up. Not to mention with how information the reader was initially provided with compared to the MC.
Nahrenne
You seemed impressed when I went through it with you in discord after I'd put your story on pause.
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You seemed impressed when I went through it with you in discord after I'd put your story on pause.
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Assurbanipal_II
Why should I put you down when you seemed so happy narrating?
Why should I put you down when you seemed so happy narrating?
Assurbanipal_II
So I let you talk and listened.
So I let you talk and listened.
Nahrenne
In other words...you weren't impressed...
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I didn't know chocolate had intelligence or sentience to be able to receive that.
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