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Generic.Archdemon
Generic.Archdemon
Generic.Archdemon
:blob_hmm_two: I have never written fanfic or the more tenuously linked expanded universe stories... do you find readers comments of [Si Vis Pacem Para Bellum] are more prickly than [Schwarz], or more or less the same?
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_neutral: The same. They are prickly on both stories, while other stories on this site are literally overshowered with fangirling.

As a reviewer in fact wrote.
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
Hello Readers Who Prefer Short Revievs,


1) Stoory is a Fanfic, wich inherently have a minus, - you need to be familar with the main story. If you are familiar with it (you know at least main characters) you are OK.


2) MC have no idea who Naruto is and where the hell she is. Wich is wonderful in my opinion.

Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
3) MC is chaotic. But if in other novels it is a sign of a bad writing, here it is a belivable and highly entertaining character.


My opininon is, - solid 4.
(I will rate it as 5 becouse there are alot of nonsens stories rated higher.)
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