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  1. Kilolo

    How to deal with this monster?

    just saying, but i don't recommend giving the protagonist party a huge boost powerup or giving a special skill only for this one time occasion boss. not only it would ruin the balance for the next plot to come, but it could also giving unpleasant feeling if you never use the new skillset for...
  2. Kilolo

    How to deal with this monster?

    there's 2 way to beat it. 1. any artificial chimera (any biological being that not born through breeding) has seams on them. seams that connect every body parts. no matter how good you create and reinforced the connection is, there's always a weakest link. since it's practically impossible to...
  3. Kilolo

    Difference or the same? A bit of help to understand

    1 : Basically human, with minor furry features (perhaps eyes, nose, ears, claws, some fur, etc) 2 : Humanoid, with significant furry features (muzzle, tail, etc); this includes centaurs and mer-people 3 : Anthropomorphic animal (or taur) 4 : Equally comfortable on two or four legs (or, if you're...
  4. Kilolo

    Settings with strong political element.

    twelve kingdoms
  5. Kilolo

    So writing help please

    crouching, perhaps?
  6. Kilolo

    Question about Yaoi and Yuri.

    uhhh. this is a tactless question but, are you a boy or a girl? (don't answer that btw) homophobic is a thing, and it's mostly stronger among guy and their circles. there's also the fact that normally most male would feel *blergh when they saw 2 males are flirting with each other. it's more...
  7. Kilolo

    Heist stories

    now you mentioned it, in most novel i read if the main character and co trying to invade a highly guarded fortress or a vault. they just mostly brute force everything 😅 the most popular one are from Harry Potter when they trying to steal from the Gringotts Vault, all they do just hire a former...
  8. Kilolo

    Writing How would you describe the smell of a fabcon or at least the smell of a bunch of flowers?

    what's a fabcon? as for flower, it actually depends on the flower type. if you present a flower like Lily then you describe it as "soothing and wet smell", for stronger flower like rose you can describe it as "strong and dry sweet scent" there's also sometimes to describe a poisonous flowers...
  9. Kilolo

    when someone just have to kill your mood

    some people just almost never have the luxury to be alone, like me.
  10. Kilolo

    Toilet thoughts: Harem or sex friends that is the question

    let's just be real for a second here. would most people even wanted to read such a story when there's this side character slut who occasionally having sex with the MC just for fun and treating him as if he's a convenient sex toy? because if the slut just down bad addicted to the mc d*ck then...
  11. Kilolo

    well, i just based it off from my personal experience. so

    well, i just based it off from my personal experience. so
  12. Kilolo

    careful with the commission contract system tho, publishing company lock you in a contract but...

    careful with the commission contract system tho, publishing company lock you in a contract but never print your manuscript (not even once) is not unheard of.
  13. Kilolo

    rather than salary, it's more like a project system. you get paid either by the publishing...

    rather than salary, it's more like a project system. you get paid either by the publishing company buy your whole manuscript and be done with it. or you get commission contract that you'll get paid around 20-30% each time there's a reprints
  14. Kilolo

    I’m looking for a trashy wish-fulfillment story with Gary Stu mc.

    just filter the highest ranking novel at NU with korean WN only filter. they're mostly check most of the list you gave there. the current popular one are Ending Maker
  15. Kilolo

    What do you think about fluff?

    i just like my daily dose of diabetes
  16. Kilolo

    Writing Prompt What do you do when the pterosaurs attack? Will you run? Will you hide? Will you fight back? Why did the resurrect? Why are they bulletproof?What Do?

    no matter how skillful a sniper is, they still dependent on the terrain and wind direction, go to a place with lots of obstacle and just ignore them. a pro sniper is trained for their patience, there's no point in playing it at their own game. or better yet, just go to a place when there's a...
  17. Kilolo

    Writing Prompt What do you do when the pterosaurs attack? Will you run? Will you hide? Will you fight back? Why did the resurrect? Why are they bulletproof?What Do?

    then just burn a charcoal around them to make carbon dioxide, at the end of the day, they're still a bird. they breath many times faster that human being. they would be died of carbon poisoning way before human could get lightheaded from it.
  18. Kilolo

    Writing Prompt What do you do when the pterosaurs attack? Will you run? Will you hide? Will you fight back? Why did the resurrect? Why are they bulletproof?What Do?

    uhhh, are this Pterosaurs supposed to be a jargon or was it an actual flying ancient creature we talking about? i just can't imagine this summary with the image of an actual Pterosaurs
  19. Kilolo

    Brick is evolving

    start from hard brick made of clay then fire mage found a way to make it sturdier by using explosion spell instead of regular fire spell to made those brick alchemist accidentally found out after spilling an extract of medicinal herb actually made it more solid, lighter, but just as sturdy they...
  20. Kilolo

    Justifying Character Decisions

    i think this is good enough tho? i am a lazy reader and oftenly skim a paragraph if they just repeating the same thing with same subtext. 2 paragraph or more would be indeed overbearing, but 2 lines like this should be fine. at least for me.
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