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  1. Elateam

    Novels where there is kingdom building.

    I recommend reading Enlightened Empire. It's on SH but I'm pretty sure all the chapters are available on RR. The style and the way the world is represented is, if not, one of the best for a kingdom-building and industrialization story.
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    Pantser Type Authors Help!

    My advice might be what others have alluded to already by I'll just give it anyways. I'm 100% a pantser. I don't have time nor do I care about planning my arcs. The most I ever plan is 5 chapters ahead with a single sentence to get the gist of what I'll be writing towards. And I used to write...
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    Eastern vs Western big/ noble families

    Well the novel I usually read that got me started on my piece is called Tales of The Reincarnated Lord. It's based on the Early Modern Era and deals with the things you described (if I remember right). But it stopped because of political pressure, though there are a lot of chapters and I enjoyed...
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    Issue with ratings.

    I've got no clue what you guys are talking about because—get this—I've got five stars on my webnovel!!! Watch me get spammed with one star ratings. Jokes aside, the ratings I've recieved feel pretty forced. It's like people gave me a five star rating because of something unrelated to my actual...
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    How would you rate Earth in terms of Worldbuilding?

    Couldn't have said it better than I. Where else in the universe would there be a War to End All Wars, followed by another War that ended up being worse and that led to a moment of... relative peace? That has lasted more than 70 revolutions around the Sun? Disgusting I say! Disgusting! Sounds...
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    Thoughts on a Story theme

    Reading your blurb, it seems interesting to me, especially if you're character is looking at stopping 9/11. But really it's the genre. Since you're thinking about the story being short it would make for a nice, emotional, dramatic tale, especially if there is politics involved. That's how I see...
  7. Elateam

    Don't forget a free pass for imprisonment as well

    Don't forget a free pass for imprisonment as well
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    What are the things that you feel like are a must in a story?

    Suffering and a struggle.
  9. Elateam

    Writing Prompt CoronaVirus Prompts

    Time to get banned from entering China! ### "Shit!" Zhou kept tapping the floor without any sign of stopping. His suit felt wrinkled. His eyes wandered the vast map of the city of Wuhan on a monitor. There in the central park were the hospitals the central government had set up a few days ago...
  10. Elateam

    Because it must stay where it is needed.

    Because it must stay where it is needed.
  11. Elateam

    Newbie writer. Hoping for some tough love.

    I agree with this. Revenge can make for great character exposition and motivation if it also reveals how an individual sees the World or if the act/process of revenge is also tied to a character's inner struggle, values and arc (Like Hamlet in Shakespeare who has to struggle with taking revenge...
  12. Elateam

    Searching for partners who are actively searching to improve

    I mean, I can strive to improve with you but I haven't invested points into critiquing :sweating_profusely:
  13. Elateam

    Damn man, no toxic flaming? Ima sit this one out.

    Damn man, no toxic flaming? Ima sit this one out.
  14. Elateam

    What are you researching?

    No! Not the Gulags Comrade! Jokes aside, there has to be a reform of the Paradox forums. The moderators are paid by Paradox and so that just makes them ban anything that's critical of the company. I've just read a reddit post talking about how the guy got banned for criticizing Paradox's move...
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    What are you researching?

    Honestly, you're right. I only ever buy the important DLCs when it's on sale but at the same time it's understandable. They've catered to a niche market of players for the past 20 years. They've been putting out DLC , improving the gaming engine, making the games easier to get a new generation...
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    What are you researching?

    Honestly I have to agree. I play EU4 with MEIOU and TAXES on very hard now so it isn't as easy as before, but HOI4 is just too easy, even with Kaiserreich it's still too simple. Hopefully CK3 isn't too easy of a game since I really enjoyed CK2 a lot.
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    What are you researching?

    Ah yes, I too am a EU4 and HOI4 player. Just raise morale and discipline and you'll wipe out a mere 50K army /s I've been doing research on British exploitation in India for ways in which I can do some of that in my story. But I've got to re-research the Caste System now because it's origins...
  18. Elateam

    The Poem Depository

    I will miss thee As I leave for the front To defend our pride With all my and my brothers might Even in the dead of night, For Thee, Darling. How do I feel? What is there to feel? We lions, Fighting for freedom One day Under the scorching Sun Another In the middle of the monsoon. But I would...
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    Writing Is there an audience for this here?

    I first wrote poetry before I started writing a story and I'd have to agree with the others, you'll have to figure it out on your own as I have been. With my poems, I decided to put them into my story rather than creating a separate series since my poems act as shameless exposition for my story...
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    Username and Avatar

    I misspelled the name I actually wanted and got this. Now I've got to deal with it for the rest of my life and after-life and the life after the after-life if there is one. I need to change my avatar picture but I've got nothing to change it into for now... or do I have one o.O
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