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Much appreciated, I understand where your coming from because it was indeed the case with the blandness, I was excited to write the old man. My writing is like a roller coaster, it's sometimes good, mostly bland, something I need to work on. Again, thank you for the input!

Okie dokie, thx for the info

So does @Notadate have another thread open?

Have to hold out hope. Maybe someone else will review in OP's place. Hope is a powerful thing after all.

I don't know why I'm not going to RR since I was just there. This is my first novel which I AM currently working on. I got some feedback on it from you a long time ago. It's been through feedback after feedback from all the lovely people on here and now I'm seeing if its good, because I've been...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ I think my novel fits the bill in one way or another.

probably, that's cool though, never seen it in that tab

I'm confident in my plot, not my grammar, but my story is there as I have been told. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

Yeah, b Yeah, but it usually ends well. I write off of inspiration so when I think ahead, when its time to finally write that portion the ideas have been bubbling for some time and I get new inspiration for another direction thats way better.

I have the same thoughts, I'm only requesting this to gauge my current consistency, then I'll have to find a way to increase it to reasonable levels. My new mission is to create quality feed!

Could I send you a chapter I feel confident in to see if that was good? I recently wrote a chapter where I was in the zone as well as took in some other feedback and would like to see if that made any improvements. Thank you as always for the feedback.

I'm coming back to the pen with some revised feed, let me know if its of a higher grade: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

I've already requested feedback on here I'm pretty sure but I've done some revisions, if you got free time let me know how I did. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

Makes sense, I just write like that because I don't want my paragraphs being too long, I'll try to figure something out. Thank you again for the help

Thanks' a bunch for the feedback, even though I revise again and again I always miss stuff or have something to improve upon. The feedback was much appreciated. Also for the fragmentation, I've gotten that feedback before but I never seem to fix it, I think it might just be part of my writing...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

Thank you for the review. You are indeed right about the sentence structure, I've been told that a bunch of times but I still don't know how it's weird so I would love some details. Repetition is also something I find myself doing quite often, I'm always forgetting words. If there's anything...