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  1. ParticleOfSand

    Am I evil?

    Neither. You're just having fun.
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    Talk me out of this idea.

    Just think of all the other better ideas you could be writing...
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    Weak to Strong vs Overpowered Characters

    What about strong to stronger? It gives the main character something to work off, but he's not perfect and there are plenty of possible challenges.
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    Spacing Preferences?

    Option A. Option B feels like there's too much spacing for normal lines. Maybe between scenes with a line as an indication, but anything else feels overused.
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    Your thoughts on the Minotaur

    You could use that sentiment of the minotaur being weak and pull a twist that makes him important. Otherwise, he'd just be a throwaway character.
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    Here's a scenario for you.

    "I can't beat the shit out of you without getting closer."
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    Can someone help me with my new cover art image?

    As far as I remember, my cover is auto resized and it looks fine. Just need to make sure the proportions are close enough.
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    What is Your Longest Story So Far? (Chapter wise)

    160 chapters, 520,000 words
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    Writing Prompt A Meeting with the Author

    My main character will hold a knife to my neck and force me to write more power ups into his life, all while giving me a friendly smile and talking about negotiating.
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    I need genuine advice. I genuinely can't update consistently.

    The thing about art is that you need to learn to accept your imperfections. Story telling is no different. You might be able to create one perfect piece, but you also fail a lot. Don’t be bogged down by those failures and run with it. Maybe you have a few plot holes, but you should use that to...
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    Do you like (as select like) your own chapters?

    No, I want my stats to exclude myself.
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    Need a tip regarding a plot point in my new story

    I say 10 loops. It leaves enough room for unknowns, but also gives him a lot of experience. Anything more than that becomes kind of unrealistic since he would already know everything.
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    How fast did your novel take off?

    I have 494k words across 151 chapters with 220ish readers. There are plenty of stories on this site with far higher ratios than mine.
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    Cast-&-forget or power-supplied armor?

    Definitely cast and forget for practicality. But if we're thinking from a story perspective, the PS form could be a way to distinguish how skilled someone is.
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    Last non-fiction book you read.

    The Omnivore's Dilemma by Michael Pollen
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    How long until someone writes an OG Micky Mouse story here?

    The fact you thought of this makes you a degenerate
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    Tips on writing fight scenes?

    That seems about right. I've written 3000+ words on a single fight scene so don't be afraid to go into the details. The bigger worry should be whether the descriptions flow together well or if it's just a pile of words.
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    Aspire to write like this!

    I feel that the narration played a part in making it sound better
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    reader mad

    Many all the authors just use the same list of common names, you know the bare amount of effort
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    The void

    What the fuck is a red-black tree and why do we care if the uncle is black? Also, why is it so hard to get rid of a black child?
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