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    Recommendations must create and manage his own world

    I was also a huge fan of World Keeper but as far as I know its the only sandbox style story. Best way I could describe it. Its the Minecraft of cultivation stories. Main character makes the world. I would love to see more stories written in universe for World Keeper, of other Keepers, but if...
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    Continued: Her full lips and dark brown eyes paired well with the sharp angles of her face to...

    Continued: Her full lips and dark brown eyes paired well with the sharp angles of her face to create an arrogant or even challenging impression on others. Men would describe her appearance more as sexy than sweet and cute. It was less likely that they would invite her out to eat; more likely...
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    To avoid overuse of pronouns, focus on the feeling of showing the reader instead of telling...

    To avoid overuse of pronouns, focus on the feeling of showing the reader instead of telling them. Her appearance in chapter 2 for example "El turned on the tap again and washed her face a second time before inspecting it in the mirror. Her skin looked dull, the result of almost two years without...
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