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  1. RyujiSakamata

    How do you start your stories???

    sex, we're in scribblehub anyway
  2. RyujiSakamata

    Disability Rep

    does walking with a prosthetic foot count?
  3. RyujiSakamata

    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Closed until further notice.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/861029/cosplay-elf-from-another-world/
  4. RyujiSakamata

    About signing a contract

    If you're proud to write a shit story for dollars, you can. But I think it isn't possible for now since you need to have a quota income before earning. You could write a 1.5k word count chapter and paraphrase it thirty times, and you'll still enter their attendance bonus for a month. Also, WN...
  5. RyujiSakamata

    Does Character POV important in novel?

    fak rules. just write what u want and rock & roll to the world
  6. RyujiSakamata

    First Chapter Analysis

    no tnx
  7. RyujiSakamata

    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Woah! Seeing you having a feedback thread was nice. Btw, I'm just visiting here hehe (no need feedback)
  8. RyujiSakamata

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    I'm quite grateful for your honest feedback. I'm expecting that you will note most of my technical mistakes like what you did in my first story, but was involving mental disorder patients that necessary? Don't you think it was over the line? If I followed your logic, you're telling my readers...
  9. RyujiSakamata

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    I liked your review! You mentioned the technical things I should work on. Thank you very much. Btw, are you still willing to check my other work as well, since I only had the first chapter? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/861029/cosplay-elf-from-another-world/
  10. RyujiSakamata

    if you could do one thing without anyone knowing...

    That was never my intention. The story was posted 12 hrs ago and just got approved late. My real intention was the question itself. I'm having writer's block for character profile.
  11. RyujiSakamata

    if you could do one thing without anyone knowing...

    If you could do one thing without anyone knowing it was you who did it... What would it be?
  12. RyujiSakamata

    Free bad feedback thread

    can you can diss my story too? i'm a masochist
  13. RyujiSakamata

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    This thread seems strict. I should offer mine as well. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/832680
  14. RyujiSakamata

    Should I stop using ChatGPT for editing?

    Idk about GPT, but my editor uses the mix of Grammarly and Hemingway Editor. Grammarly is still bot tho
  15. RyujiSakamata

    Was my dialogue bad?

    I'm interested in this new ending.
  16. RyujiSakamata

    Was my dialogue bad?

    The context: If it's already bad, how can I make it worse?
  17. RyujiSakamata

    Writing How important is character arc to you?

    It's possible to have an interesting character without an arc/development. Kishotenketsu format was commonly used in comedy and slice of life stories to leave the readers hanging.
  18. RyujiSakamata

    Scaver's Free Feedback thread.

    you can check one of my works
  19. RyujiSakamata

    Doravg's free feedback thread (Closed to catch up with all the requests)

    Would you mind criticizing one of my works too? For the story improvement purposes as the reason. Thank you very much. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/832680
  20. RyujiSakamata

    Feedback thread from me.

    Thank you very much
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