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  1. baandrews

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Thanks, I attempted to clarify the first paragraph, and no idea how you managed to catch the version that was only live for a few hours before I realized I uploaded the wrong one. Not sure how the rest of the feedback is supposed to help me improve either, but if you don't point it out, wouldn't...
  2. baandrews

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hello there! I'm a sucker for honest opinions, and ways to improve my writing, so might as well submit it here too! Thanks in advance! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1000641-nateaser-reborn-as-my-love-interest/chapter/1000642/
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