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  1. Veneko

    Phone?

    Didn't need to open the spoiler tag before knowing it was a Blackberry. My old man had one just like the one in the middle of the picture. Brings back memories of playing at Brick Breaker at the coffee shop he always took me to. Then our relationship went downhill and so on. Haven't seen him...
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    First Story To Post Here.

    I'll make time to read it later. Hope you get lots of views!
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    Need friends, possibly crazy!

    Slow cooking produces the most tender meat. It'll be too late before they realize. It was too late before I realized it.
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    What kind of writing style do you have?

    Despite publishing my serial on first person, I have an easier time with the 3rd POV. A jump in writing speed too My prose goals are describing vividly while letting the reader's imagination do the heavy lifting. The way I see it, our brains take stimulus in and renders them. Give the reader...
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    Inspire me with your stupid experiences

    I was in elementary back then. Little old me was taking an extracurricular English class. Our teacher was a young woman working at the foreign language center. The class had around a dozen children of similar ages; some I knew from school. The teacher tells us to write a short presentation...
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    How's the whole virus stuff affecting you?

    Democracy *Pays respects. That sucks hard. It's not like there's a pressing need for a limit. My college moved everyone to video calls. And most communication with teachers is done via Whatsapp. Can't wait for this mess to end. I'll appreciate 2020 if some sense of normalcy returns.
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    How's the whole virus stuff affecting you?

    I'm from Venezuela. Currently feeling incredibly disappointed. Venezuelan politicians are pieces of shit. Did you know America gave control of foreign assets to the Opposition Government? Millions of dollars. I'm talking about the countries' assets in the US. Again, millions of dollars. The...
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    Writing Prompt

    Volts x Amperes. As an electrical engineer, this is the way.
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    This is my very first chapter, need feedback if it’s good

    It's very clearly an isekai. And pigeon blast to the face is a novel way to die. Props for that. In the mindset of a reader, the chapter leaves me with a lot of questions. Is it a comedy series? Will pigeons or birds play an important part of the story? The description of 'delicious toes' jumps...
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    Writing Prompt Top 5 Times You Almost Died

    Each game eventually meets its end. On my vision, tinted red by the system’s interface. The message ‘WASTED’ appeared. Its characters written with Impact font. “Attention all present! LIFE Battle Royale’s first international tournament is concluding. Bring our finalists forward!” It was my...
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