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Yeah I fixed the first to convey there was always at least 5 inches of snow. Ty :) The thing about the grandfather would be a case of "naturalism vs semantics". It's not that it says the father of her father was the dog, it just repeats that grandfather was her father's father. I've changed it...

disdain. DISTAIN JUST SOUNDS RIGHT!!

Awesome! Would you be able to tell me which words might be used incorrectly? I wouldn't be surprised either way; I frequently misuse words like hollow-cheeked, but sometimes I use words that have greyish definitions, so it's like "Ahhh, I'll let that pass, for now." XD And yes. It is Chloe...

I haven't used this forum in a long time, though I'd still love to know your opinion on the opening chapter of my post-apocalyptic horror novel. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/274829-frost/chapter/274832/

I 100% agree. I don't think it's great at all, just not as bad as they think it is. You just see so many books that are new and ongoing, barely just begun, and people are like "Best thing I've ever read". I don't mean just books with typos, ones with plot-holes and inconsistencies etc.. And then...

Thank you so much!

The story has been around for a while. As in its been published on RR for months, but I've taken it down for revision. Either way dw I'm not talking about ratings; I was referring to feedback from readers on servers. Thank you for your input anyway!

Amongst The Sky. Feedback across multiple platforms sorry

SO I'VE been writing a novel for an awfully long time – I've honestly lost count of how long it's been – and so far, all I've received is negative criticism. That doesn't mean it's not constructive, but . . . really?? Is it truly that bad? I honestly can't help but get defensive. Because...

I'll be down to review swap. I too will not rate or review if it's not to my tastes; it may take a while with all the requests I've gotten over multiple platforms, so no rush!

I think I pasted the wrong link

I think you read the older version.

Might I ask what you're reading the story on? Because I just checked and the sentence you referred to is not on Scribblehub rather an old version on another site. :/

Anyway I'll start your book ASAP. I have like 3 or 4 to get through atm XD

Agreed. We've all been there man.

No problem it's just a matter of personal taste. XD

Again, I also don't understand why you are asking me directly why I did it. In a way it seems you know it's intentional, This is actually exactly the intention! I commented this before even reading this one too! :D

The second one is definitely style-based. And I actually don't like the sound of it since the grammar is incorrect and it provides a tautology in your given example. *Huddling up against his desk, he sat comfortably on a swivel chair, typing away on his computer (he had been a quick typer)...

You see, this is why we need people like you. The following is not an argument, just mythoughts: I do agree with everything you said. My initial thoughts on this thread were "Oh, God, not another crybaby looking for attention!" But as I too skimmed through the thread, I found that the poster...

I'd love to!