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It'll preface with chapter 1 is full of foreshadowing. I tried fixing what you've in the 4th chapter but tbh idk if it did anything or not bcus I was fixing it going off of the feeling that something was off about my writing, I still do feel that way... I'd appreciate if you look into my 3rd and...

I'm currently floating aimlessly, and I supposed that some feedback would change that. I'd really appreciate any comments about my story. Thanks in advance! If you do indeed read my story, please share your thoughts in this thread. Again, Thanks...

I'm currently floating aimlessly, and I supposed that some feedback would change that. I'd really appreciate any commentary about my story guys! Thanks in advance! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/544381/black-swan-records/

I've just updated my fourth chapter, equaling a total of roughly 10k word written. Any feedback would be immensely helpful!

Awesome! I'll be refering this post for a while, hopefully it stays... Thanks!

Is there anywhere I could maybe get a test group to review my writing before posting online?

Thanks! I'll try my best to flesh out the characters well.

Yup that's the idea. Originally I was planning on giving context within the first 10k words, but it depends on the flow really. Tbh I'm mostly worried about the 2nd chapter. Idk if it was too much fitted into the 2nd chapter or/and the MC is consistent in personality or not, and the...

Thanks!

This is my first attempt at writing a LitRPG. The intention was to realise my imagination through writing. LitRPG has been a staple read for me this past year. I hope for opinions on how I can improve my story, thank you! Btw the synopsis won't be written until I've solidified my vision of what...