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  1. WitheredSage

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    Hmm... someone has already told this to me before, but for some reason, I still don't get it. I just can't figure it out, somehow. Ah... my narrative is still bad. Like you said, I tend to focus on some details that doesn't really matter that much. I originally wrote this story in...
  2. WitheredSage

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    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/237247/arsenals-of-ephilor-the-rising-fire/ I'll gladly hear your thoughts. Thanks for your time.
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