Man, i think you did a good job writing this. But keep in mind that a good cultivation novel does not necessarily need to have all three of these factors, for example cultivation chat group. There are several ways to grab attention and the most successful ones are usually the innovative ones...
By the world, I see you have a quite high patience stat. Anyway, if you or anyone wants to give me a feedback for my First chap, I would gladly listen (I mean, read) it. I can also read and give my humble opnion of your work first chap.
I recently posted ten chapters of my novel Fearing Life, Coveting Death.
However, I still have no feedback, can someone tell me if what I am writing is good?