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Oh, I see the flaw now of the first half of the chapter. Thanks for the feedback!

Oh nice! Then here's mine: I've Become Familiar as a Cat!

Hello! I just want to know whether my synopsis can 'hook' or 'meh' the potential readers. As for the chapters, well, still two for a moment, but I like to find out if they are fine, are confusing, have too many details, or are disjointed to read. I may have not realized after I wrote and read...