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What the title says. I'm not going to actually have the main character commit suicide, but the character being suicidal is going to be used to explain a lot of their actions that differ from the norm.

I feel like I'm doing decently successful but nobody has actually given me a review on what is good about my story and what I should improve about it so I'm asking for help from here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/421562/journey-to-become-a-great-spirit/

I finally finished writing a bunch of changes to my character's physical appearance and I'm finally getting around to going into great detail about what my character looks like so I wanna know what exactly I should describe. I know about hair colour and height. My character will mainly look the...