Search results

I doubt that. I read all of that novel's chapters and the characters always and will always take the protagonist's words at face value. And that's not to mention the crap-shoot trickery of the main character. Always works, even if it's genuinely bad.

When the story suddenly introduces food diplomacy or hot springs bathing because yolo. Bonus points if those aforementioned stuff are used to stop a war. I really can't fathom the mental gymnastics of the authors who write that kind of stuff. Like, are you serious? I just... can't. It's too...

Abiogenesis/Autogenesis?

Which? Which what? To open up a card? You could simply borrow a card from your parents, like the Minecraft kids nowadays. If they could do it, then so could you. Also, the art is gorgeous. I like it. A bit of refining and you could end up like those top artists on Patreon.

I used to check my writing on Grammarly when I was still new to writing. Though my reliance on it became lesser and lesser as I became more proficient. Do I think it's good? Yes, especially for the new authors who wanted to publish their first story. It can teach others not to rely on...

Basically a bush/plant turned as a light source. Here is a better explanation.

Rush Lights are not very well used in medieval fantasy novels to my knowledge. It's always either torch, candles, or oil lamps which only the few had access to back then.

I used to, completed several of them in fact. Now I don't. They're just predictable to the point where the story itself doesn't even matter anymore. That, or I just grew up. As for my experience, it was a like binging dozens upon dozens of movies and tv shows in deep midnight. It was a slog...

Pretty much yes. The older someone's age, the more respected/venerated he should be. If I recall what's the reason behind those kind of insults, it because of the implication that aside from the speaker (The one who calls himself older), everyone around him are simple brats who doesn't know...

Reader-wise, I would rather read a full length chapter than a chapter chopped into numerous parts. It's a pain to read a chopped chapter knowing that you only invested your time knowing nothing, learning nothing. The story didn't progress, and you still have to read the other parts to fully...

I would add comma to "shorts, and..." Not really punctuation but I would remove the word "well" from "well summer," remove "was" and "it" from "like electricity was flowing through," and make the "My lungs burned with each breath" a new paragraph instead. It doesn't stick well with the rest of...

For me, it's when a character is progressing to a specific location or area. I like to keep those precise and concise. Mostly 1 to 2 paragraphs and that's about it. Though mostly I like to write them in crumbs, that way it's much more easier to read. I usually get lost on the middle of my...