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    About material to make coin

    You either go super big brain and create an entirely new kind of fantasy material (Elysium, magic grass, mana crystal...) or stick with the good old metal coins. Gold, silver, copper or any metal good enough to become currency will do. Just so you know, gold and silver coins from the Tang...
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    Petition to remove “loli” tag from scribblehub

    Big oof. Me too. I didn't even realize that tag existed at all. Like, we aren't nh*ntai or something.
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    Need some entertainment

    Some light novels I'd recommend: - Rokujouma no Shinryakusha - Hidan no Aria - Tearmoon Empire - Oda Nobuna no Yabou For manga: - Hakka Shoujo Btw, I also highly recommend Black Bullet (light novel). It's very good but not for entertainment, you have been warned.
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    What is the optimal number of limbs?

    For a normal human who is used to having 2 hands and 2 legs? That is also the optimal number. If you slap an extra pair of hands on a normal human, their brain might overload from the extra stress. But for someone or something who can handle them? As many as Avalokiteshvara's.
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    5 chapters done, looking for feedback

    Thanks for feedback on everything else, especially the narration part. As for the plot related issues, S hesitating to defend herself and the two's indifference to their 6 year reunion will be explained later on. As for the zombies, I'm pretty sure I put a huge spoiler in that chapter too. And...
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    The Replacer thingy was partly my idea. I also know about the other game. But this one is different though because this particular Replacer group while the other Replacer Syndicate group wants to evolve human into a better race to prepare for the apocalypse. And just to be clear the chess...
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    did world war 3 really happen?

    Russia don't mess around. You could clearly see how swiftly they did things in the war against ISIS and other terrorist organizations in the Middle-East. The US dragged the war out for months to try and benefit from it, but Russia straight up bombed those guys back to stone age.
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    did world war 3 really happen?

    Already forseen this happening years ago when Murica attacked Libya, Syria... and supported revolutions in various other countries without any public opposition except Russia. If Murica can do it legitly, Russia can also do it legitly (which they just did). And if these two big bosses can do it...
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Looking for feedback on my work: Operation Plague Heart
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    5 chapters done, looking for feedback

    Here's the link: Operation Plague Heart Need some in-depth feedbacks, mainly about my writing style. I'm not used to creative writing in general so I'm afraid it might be too stiff. It would be nice if you also comment on the synopsis, story pacing or other aspects. Thank you for your time.
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    Do you sometimes think "this chapter would be easy" but then thing happened?

    Got everything planned out before writing so it doesn't happen often, both here and when I'm writing reports at work. My main problem when writing a story is balancing out the talking. After writing like 1000 words, I looked back and said to myself "WTF is this? A drama script?" then had to...
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    What...

    I'm more of a survival game player so... Class (more like role): Doctor/Paramedic, I'd like to utilize my irl knowledge here but surgery/pharmacology are beyond me Customization: middle-aged dandy, old enough to have extensive knowledge, but still young enough to not have too much trouble...
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