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Please give me a feedback about my very first novel, My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World. After Volume 1 (which had 20-25 chapters), I plan to translate it to japanese and upload it on syosetu, hoping that it would be adapted as a Light Novel. I want feedbacks so that...

I chose the pen name "BoundLess" because I like to read and write stories about the omnipotence or the weak-to-strong omni beings, and the term "Boundless" are used to depict characters who transcends everything, even to their fiction or authors that wrote them. The avatar I used is one of my...

Oh, well I couldn't think of anything, though. I want to introduce the villain at the early stage so that the revenge trope would be executed HAHAHAAH. but there's nothing I could do

Ohhh! I expect more criticism but this makes me more determined to continue! btw I don't understand wdym about the story being "overdone". If you could, please specify. and yeah, i'll fix the sudden change of POV. Thank You for this feedback! i'll make sure to improve my writing skills

what about mine? I really want someone to give feedbacks on my novel because it's my first-time on doing actual webnovel (the other one is just for fun) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474537/my-powershifting-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/

didn't find offensive at all. It's better I found more perceptive person here to criticize my art, because lately all they do is to appreciate, without dropping some serious criticism like this. I'll try to tweak it by change their designs so that they'll fit to the character I desired. Thank...

what are the parts that looks generic? their character design? please specify so that maybe I will change it. their designs are like that because, the mc must be an average-looking dude, while the girl will be a mysterious-like women, and her design is inclined to her power on the future arcs. I...

What the- HAHAHAHHA. on second look, they look like they're doing it. btw what about their character designs? is it good?

I would like to show you my original unfinishedfanart, at the same time, promoting my novel HAHAHA. These 2 characters, Shin Soru and Mitsuha Reika, are the main characters on my novel "My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World" and my first book 1 cover (made by myself, cuz...