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Thank you! It's always good to get this sort of feedback.

Thank you! I was thinking there wasn't much of a hook. I'll work on making it stronger and more enticing.

I would be interested in getting feedback on my synopsis. Here is the link - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/507279/wayfarers-guild/

In those sort of situations I say to myself, 'What's the worst thing that could happen to them right now?' or 'What goal are they trying to achieve and how can I add a problem to achieving that goal?' Usually that works for me. Other times, my brain is trying to tell me there is something wrong...

This seems like fun. I would love constructive feedback on the first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/507279/wayfarers-guild/