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Thank you and yeah I just read your "edited" comment and I was wondering, I have just gone through the first chapter quickly and replaced every ";" and replaced them with the appropriate period. Is this what you meant? (I am planning on rephrasing and rewriting certain parts so ignore those for...

Alright well I will get on doing that! Thank you for all the feedback :)

Thanks yeah that makes sense, so basically I need to improve my grammar and phrasing and that would greatly improve the reading experience and overall score?

Amazing guy who helped review my first few chapters of my story! Thanks again!

Thank you very much for your review, this is my very first story I have every really attempted to write so I am looking for any feedback I can! Thank you for your response Ill take it forward and look to improve my work! If I were to ask, what would you give it out of 5 for a first attempt and...

Ah well here is my first chapter! Hope if you get round to reading it, you enjoy :) https://www.scribblehub.com/read/558977-one-with-the-enemy/chapter/558984/

Hey! I am a new writer and have decided to begin my first series, One With The Enemy. The series can be described as a loosely historical piece as the majority of the characters and settings and era are taken inspiration from Vikings ect however, this story has a special twist to make it unique...