Bit Bored (Editor Swap)

[TheEldritchGod]

If you wish to do an edit swap or something, I'm up for it. I'm not really in need of an editor, but I'm thinking it never hurts to occasionally do this sort of thing. "Back in my day before AI, you did this sort of thing to stay on your toes."

So, I got like 11 chapters of a story, you look it over, I look over about the same amount of your shit, give comments and suggestions, that sort of thing. Blah Blah Blah. You know the drill. I'm procrastinating a lot lately and being an editor with a deadline will help shake things up.

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

Would have done it if you said bleh bleh bleh instead of blah blah blah

 

[melchi]

Would have done it if you said bleh bleh bleh instead of blah blah blah

Same. The blahs should be edited to blehs.

 

[melchi]

I don't mind looking at it if you want feedback.