BL with lots of sex and stakes.

[kaylawritesthepaige]

You've probably seen my thread before but im making another one. My book is about a gay stripper whose has to prostitute to pay back his ex boyfriend. The stakes are that he has a four year old daughter he could lose with his lifestyle. I wanted to write p*rn but with a lot of plot. There are some grammar errors, I know I'm fixing them. I'd like to have some feedback on the story so far. It's only in the beginning but I have more written to be uploaded. Please check out my book MARS and leave a comment on there if you really enjoyed it. Even if it's just the first or second chapters, I appreciate all feedback. Be as blunt as you like. Thank you!